Bladen Neril

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Name: Bladen Neril
Home world: Aldivy
Species: Human
Age: 30
Height: 5'10
Weight: 168 lbs
Eye color: blue
Hair color: blonde
Weapon: purple colored lightsaber
Family: Mary (mom dead) jirem (dad dead)
Marital: single
Children: none

Bladen is a human from Aldivy. He lived outside of New Oldtown until he was 8. His parents went to work in the city. Later that day the city was obliterated and his parents died. He found some other survivors that were going to Greenton. He tagged along. When they arrived there they were exhausted. The others in his group went to a hotel. He never saw them after that. He decided to explore the town. He found a cantina that was looking for workers. The owner, Rohan, of the cantina was desperate for a waiter an felt sorry for the child so he hired Bladen.

After one year of working at the cantina Bladen became friends with Rohan. Bladen was working when Rohan came up and pulled him to the side. Rohan heard a rumor about a Jedi on Harix Bladen was looking for a way to avenge his parents. Bladen only had 100 credits saved but he knew he could make up the rest if he tried hard enough. One year passed sense then and he only had 750 credits. He needed to get the last 250 soon. Bladen feared the Jedi might die or leave the planet if he hasn't already. He remembered a man who won that much last night from playing sabacc. He was drunk and the cantina was closed so Bladen had to escort him home. He had an evil thought in his head now. During his break he went to the man's house. He was hesitant to go in at first in fear someone would be in there but he had a strange feeling that told him no one was in the house. He had this strange feeling before many times. The house was very nice. It was well decorated and spacious. He saw the credits and grabbed them. He ran outside and back to the cantina. He got the rest of his credits. Rohan went over to him to see what the commotion was about. Bladen showed him the credits. Rohan gave him 100 credits to pay the Jedi for training. Bladen said good bye and ran to the transport ship.

When he arrived he asked around about a Jedi. A short time after a man pulled him in an ally. He had a lightsaber at his side. Bladen knew this was the Jedi. He brought Bladen to his hideout. Bladen explained why he was their and the Jedi accepted. The Jedi's name was Darelc. Bladen trained with Darelc for ten years. For Bladen's last test he had to build a lightsaber. He decided to use a one sided lightsaber. It didn't take him to long to figure out how to build it. When Bladen realized he couldn't learn anything else from Darelc he left. The only thing he had to learn was the dark side.

Bladen started looking for a sith master to train him. Darelc found out about Bladen's plans and tried to kill him. Bladen was walking through the door when Darelc attacked. He took out his lightsaber and blocked his master's swing. Bladen cut his master's had off then his head. He grabbed his credits and left with Darelc's star ship. The one thing he didn't learn was to fly a ship though so crashed the ship in town. He ran away and snuck in to a transport ship. He paid the pilot to change the ship's course to Kaal where the sith that would train was at.

Once he arrived at Kaal the sith named Darth Silrax greeted him. He trained with him for ten years. Darth Silrax taught Bladen all he would teach about the dark side but Bladen needed more so he snuck away looking for more knowledge. He didn't care about avenging his parents anymore an he couldn't.
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Re: Bladen Neril

Welcome to Epics.

I have a little problem with the timeline of your bio to the one we have here on Epics.

Oldtown was destroyed around 7 ABY. That would be 10 years till the time we have now at Epics (17 ABY). If your character was around 8 years old as the time was destroyed, it wouldn't fit with his age in the stats.

And when he was looking for a Jedi, there were almost none around. Most had been killed while the Empire, so how did the Jedi hide and survive? Also how did the Sith had been hidden?

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Hello and welcome to Epics. :]

I am curious as to why he sought Jedi training, why the Jedi would require payment for it, and why your character decided to go for Sith training right after.  No one is supposed to even know about the Sith.  And also, the questions Corran gave above. :]
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