Just in time for Veteran's Day!

Post is in the private channel for viewing.  Sam I think i invited you too, but if I didn't, I can post it or email it to you.

I saw it and replied.

posted.

added a paragraph, and I think two lines for you Sam.

Good job, Marcus. I'll post mine on Sunday. I want to give it the once-over since it is my first attempt at a first-person narrative. I'll also post the next one after that, with Gavin on Foroest prepping for the mission and learning that Marcus has said no to Troutman's proposal.

And posted! Lot shorter than I realized, and I plan to revert back to third-person narrative in the follow up on Foroest. The whole rah-rah fire and idealism segment comes from The Rebel Files, and was a message Mon Mothma had sent to Princess Leia way back when.

Nice Post Gavin!